The
Friday Flash prompt was more challenging than it might seem. I kept going to obvious
ideas, which I really like to avoid. Then the title of the prompt, "Billboard,"
made me think "sign." That turned into "The Sign," which I
knew would be the title of my story, but I wasn't sure what to do with it. I
began thinking about alternate meanings for "sign" and this story emerged.
Although
it's a completely different story and written in first person, it has the same feel
as "The Forbidden Dance" and "Sapphire Rose."
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click on the badges below the story to read all the other amazing posts!
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you enjoy,
Ria ;)
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The Sign
By Ria Restrepo
Copyright ©2019. All rights reserved.
They
said it was a sign. A bad omen. Blood on the moon meant death and destruction.
The
villagers gathered in the town square, kneeling as they prayed for the Lord's
mercy. Some were so distraught they rocked, baying as crimson slowly engulfed
the moon.
Standing
there, surrounded by fear and anguish, I felt nothing but wonder as I witnessed
the heavenly spectacle. No growing sense of doom. No overwhelming feeling of
dread.
Was
something wrong with me? Should I humble myself before God and beg like the
others? Should I plead forgiveness for all my unspoken desires, all my secretly
sinful ways?
A
wild wind whipped through my hair and sent tumbleweeds skittering across the
cobblestone. The townsfolk grew more agitated, taking it as further evidence of
His displeasure. Their chanting escalated.
Again,
I didn't share their distress and found it invigorating. My heart pounded, raw
excitement surging through my veins. I felt inexplicably drawn to follow it
into the desert. The thrill of the unknown beckoned me.
It
was easier than it should have been, turning away from my people, leaving
everything I'd ever known behind.
As I
walked upon the hard-packed earth, the wind guided me along a meandering path,
past cacti, sagebrush, and creosote. It wasn't long before I heard the lilting sound
of a mandolin. The enticing melody urged me on until I came to a clearing.
Beneath
the now entirely red moon, I found the source of the seductive song. The
drifter who sometimes wandered through town, and the villagers shunned for
being an outsider, sat on a tattered blanket, playing to no one.
He
watched as I moved closer, but didn't stop. The sweet notes drifted in the air,
enchanting me. I closed my eyes, letting it overtake me, swaying and writhing
to his music.
Transfixed,
I only realized he stopped playing when I felt him press his body against my
back. He stroked my check, then brushed my hair away from my shoulder. I tilted
my head back as he placed a soft kiss on my neck.
Moaning,
I surrendered, giving myself to him utterly. He slipped off my dress and lay me
on the blanket. His lips captured a nipple, his tongue teasing it, while his
skilled fingers explored my slick sex.
We
found each other there, bathed in scarlet moonlight, joined in a timeless dance.
He filled me completely, my body moving with him, following his lead. Pleasure
flowed through me, swelling until it eclipsed all my doubts and fears, and I
was lost in divine passion.
He held
me as ecstasy broke me open, releasing all the desire I'd kept locked deep
inside, his body shuddering right along with mine.
His
honeyed voice teased my ear for the first time. "Come away with me."
I
knew then that he was the sign, but one of good fortune. In loving him, I let
my wildest fantasies unwind from the dark place I kept them hidden…and was
forever joyous and free.
Just wonderfully told - such a picture you have painted - and yes what a great "sign" he was x
ReplyDeleteThank you! So glad you liked it! ;)
DeleteI loved this. From the first line you pulled me in.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Thrilled you enjoyed it! ;)
DeleteFantastic imagery and a beautiful piece of writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's a wonderful compliment! ;)
DeleteHoly hell this is beautifully done. At the end, I let out a breath I didn't even know I was holding.
ReplyDeleteWow, that's an amazing compliment! Thank you! ;)
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