Earlier
in the week, I had another story in mind, but I had some trouble getting myself
to focus. When F. Leonora Solomon posted the Friday Flash prompt, I wasn't sure
what if anything I could do with it. But then I had this far-out-there idea and
my muse decided to cooperate. Go figure.
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you enjoy,
Ria ;)
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The Red Balloon
By Ria Restrepo
Copyright ©2019. All rights reserved.
Once
upon a time, there was a red balloon like so many others, yet different. A
spark of passion swelled inside her and she longed to be free. The bright blue
sky beckoned her, but try as she might, she couldn't break loose. She was hopelessly
knotted to the rest.
The
others of her kind didn't seem to mind their inhibited fate. Sometimes, one or
a group would go off to places unknown, but always remained tethered. Maybe
that was the best she could expect—to travel the world in a tightly controlled fashion.
She knew the mundane existence would slowly drain her vitality until she shriveled
and died.
Then,
one day, something miraculous happened. A wild and warm wind blew through with
a liberating force, tearing away her oppressive bonds. It was terrifying at
first, being carried away on a slipstream into the firmament.
But
the zephyr whispered reassuringly and she quickly relaxed, relishing her sudden
freedom. All her impossible dreams were finally coming true. Sailing through
the air, she rose higher and higher. Joyous and free, she gave herself to him
completely, surrendering to his every delightful whim.
The
wind rewarded her submission affectionately. He caressed her with light drafts,
creating sensations she'd never imagined. He surrounded her, stroking her,
gently building her pleasure until she shuddered in ecstasy, lost in the
nirvana only he aroused.
Savoring
the afterglow, she slowly realized the wind was gradually taking her lower. She
was confused and somewhat disappointed when he carefully set her down in a
summer field. Was he abandoning her?
Before
she was overcome with agonizing grief, he swirled around her, guiding her in a seductive
dance. Blades of cool green grass tickled and teased her delicate flesh, stimulating
her desire all over again. Relief and rapture swiftly overtook her. He only
wanted to give her a new experience to cherish.
And
so she became devoted to the wind, the friend that freed her, the lover that
filled her with unbridle bliss. They were two of a kind—different in many ways,
but alike in all the ways that mattered. Irresistibly drawn to each other
despite all the odds.
It
wasn't all sunshine and clear skies, though. Occasionally he led her into a
storm cloud or two. The thunder and lightening were frightening initially, but
he kept her safely out of reach, showing her the magnificence of the volatile
spectacle. She quite enjoyed the rain that often accompanied these tempests.
There was something cathartic and sensual about the deluge washing over her.
Drifting
along in the night sky, below a sea of stars, also filled her with awe. Thanks
to her rescuer, there was a whole new world for her to explore. When she inevitably
lost some of her buoyancy, he filled her up and gave her new life.
Oh I loved this. I think it's one of those tales that people will interpret differently base on their own situations and I always think stories like that are absolutely gift. Wonderfully done x
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's an awesome compliment. Thrilled you enjoyed it! ;)
DeleteThat's an excellent extended metaphor. I've always imagined balloons yearning to be free...it's why they try so hard to get away.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Yes, that's pretty much where the idea came from. ;)
DeleteA very beautiful story, and such a lovely idea!
ReplyDeleteThank you! So glad you liked it! ;)
DeleteMasterfully done. I agree with Floss's point, I know how I've interpreted the story but others may have a different take.
ReplyDeleteLove how you took the metaphor and thoroughly & creatively explored it.
Thank you so much! Thrilled you enjoyed it! ;)
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